Kyladoot

I really like how it freezes a specific moment, rather that making generalizations about some emotion. I feel like I really can connect to you though it. I also like ...

I really really like this. Alot. The first stanza is stunning. I don't really like the second one, it seems a little repetitive, and I think it might be better ...

OhMiGod! I really really really liked this. I found the images great, and I found it so relatable and deep, on an unpretentious and real level. The only line which ...

"My mind ran a marathon of thoughts" I like that A LOT But the slicing like razors seems a little cleshe I like the detail about the bead, and where ...

I really like the line breaks a lot. And the punctuation.That might sound dumb, but it made it flow so smoothly and easily... I didn't even notice. The second line ...

One thing I really like to do in my poetry is use "negatives" That way, you imply stuff and still get the imagery, but in a cool round-about way. So, ...

I like this. It has really good imagery, which is real important for me. It kinda bothers me though that "this" isn't mentioned until the end. At some points, I ...