KylaGreenhut

I really like your story. It had a lot of really good historical content and was very fun to read. I like how you added the historical content into the ...

I like how you showed not tell, I also really like how you were so descriptive because that made it very interesting. I really also liked the twist at the ...

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I really like your story it has a lot of historical content and is very descriptive. I do wonder if you could have a little bit more show not tell ...

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I like how you show not tell and are very descriptive. I wonder if you could have a little bit more of an interesting tittle. Maybe you could talk a ...

I liked your story a lot it was very detailed and had good historical content. I wonder if you could talk about why the father was so mean. I also ...

I really like how descriptive you were about when she was stealing the bread. I am wondering if you could say what illness the old man had. I am also ...