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Kyaira

  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Walk

    Thanks for the critiques guys. You're right Blink that I use too many adjectives. Descriptive writing is one of my strong areas I believe, so I often over amplify my ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: nothing

    This is a really good song -- It definitely describes what it can be like to be unsure if a relationship is simply an addiction or actual love. Good job!

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Emptiness

    Thanks for the critique Blink. That piece was meant to stoop the reader into questioning, such as, "what type of person is the victim?", "what actually happened to the victim?", ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Emptiness

    I am indeed new as of... about an hour ago. Thanks so much! I wrote that a while ago, actually, but was interested in what people would get from that ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Letter to the World

    This speaks to me as well. For those of us who have experienced, and still do experience the addiction of cutting, this writing piece does wonderfully at explaining how cutting ...

    Jul 25, 2011


it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
— Carina