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Re: How Can We Sleep
Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. Now as we all know, I'm horrible at reviewing poems. So I'm just going to comment on the message. I LOVED IT! I ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Moving Forward
Great Job! For your first post this is pretty good. Welcome! I like the ending. Good Emotion. I liked it, and it was worth reading! If you ever need help ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The dog that never left his owner
Hi captain! I love your name. Anyways! 1). You had lots of run-ons and comma splices. Fix those up and you will be great! 2). I really loved the emotion ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Write What You Know
This was pretty good. I really liked it. Just a few suggestions. 1). I don't know how to tell you I'm sorry I didn't stop to explain that it's not ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Hi! I have come too review at your request. I did like this! I thought it was kinda interesting, creative, and fun. I did find some mistakes. They have been ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: I
Hi! I'm here too review! First off: I've never reviewed anything like this before, but I'll do my best! Second: I really liked this. It was nice! Third: I noticed ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games
I love the Hunger Games too! Did you guys know that there is a page about the Hunger Games? It's really cool, and there is even a discussion going on ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games
I love the Hunger Games too! Did you guys know that there is a page about the Hunger Games? It's really cool, and there is even a discussion going on ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Coconuts
Hey Firearris! I saw you in chat the other day! Anyways... This was funny! I was laughing the whole way through! Nice Job! I noticed only a few grammar errors, ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Sky Sailing
Hello! I have come to review your work! Ok, I really liked this. It was interesting, fun to read, and creative. I did notice some grammar errors, but they have ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Death
Wow, this is really amazing! I never would have thought too write something like this! But I love it! It's kind of a bittersweet ending, and I don't normally like ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: I Still Want You
Hey, I'm Ktg17! Happy Reviewing Sunday! F.Y.I., I never review Lyrics, so I'll do my best with this. This was pretty good for your first song. I can totally see ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Does anyone else hate the Twilight series?
I have not read the books OR seen the movie, but I already don't like themI don't like how everyone calls you crazy if you haven't read them, and INSANE ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: I love you
This piece has so much passion, but also so much more potential. I liked it, don't get me wrong, but here are a few tips. 1) You start with the ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Everything
OK, this was really sweet and romantic. Overall great job. I did notice a few minor errors though. 1.) Maybe say how old the characters are. I was thinking at ...
May 26, 2010
