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Re: Part One of Chapter One of Friends
Yes I in fact am on NaNoWriMo if you were wondering my username is: CrystalPony21 ^_^ thanks for the advice, sorry about my bad writing... I was kind of rushed! ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: Dark Blue Eyes
you do lovely works and I think this one stands out a lot. Its very well written and you had very good spelling and grammar this was a wonderful piece ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 8, Storming Rustboro
Im scared pokemon never had this much cussing. You do a great job of writing but pokemon us much more clean then this. Is this based of a real episode ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter One, Part One
your a very talented writer and I can tell you, I found no spelling errors or grammar issues! Good job, I cant believe how well your narrative language is. Your ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Empire Chapter 3: Nothing Stays a Secret Pt. 2
I think you have a good outline and some great ideas. But there is a little editing to be done don't worry no one is perfect on their first story. ...
Jun 30, 2013
