Krupp

Hi Krupp, Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we ...

Well flow is one of those things where either you nail it or you don't. Sometimes I just don't nail it. Obviously this is one of those times. Thanks for ...

....anything specifically needing work?

He's in a dance club, being smothered by tons of people on the dance floor. The whole crawling on the floor is metaphorical. The title was one of those times ...

Hey! I haven't read it, but it's on my will-force-myself-to-read list. Also, it's Joseph Conrad, not Jason. :wink: you're right; it is Joseph. I have no idea why I put ...

So if you guys are so sick of the damsel in distress stories why don't you try to make a story without a hero to save the day. Hmm, maybe ...

I enjoyed the book, actually. I don't think it's one of the greatest ever written, but it certainly makes its point, and that's admirable.

I'm a big fan of music and sound, so this poem has already struck a chord within me haha. It was nicely put, and the poster above me basically covered ...

It's like you said bro - I'm only doing this for the fun of it. Rap isn't my thing, exactly. Now that you've reminded me though, I recommend that you ...

i dont hate it, i just dont really like it, thats all. and when you "read and critique" something, its impossible to toss all your beliefs aside when you rate ...

yeah man, rating is kinda dumb, but you should definitly rate this thing. VAMPIRES TURN TO DRY BONES IN THE SUNLIGHT PEOPLE. jeez...... yeah, im sorry, i didnt really like ...

Hahaha, King tells it like it is. That's why he's the man.

Now this was terrific. Congratulations, I don't really have anything to say. I was left standing impressed after reading that. My apologies if you were looking for some in-depth critique, ...

...man, when you said 'funky jazz' immediately I started to think of King Crimson...haha Not bad. Some might complain about the length, but I'm not one of those people. Well ...

Sure have. Doesn't mean that one writes better when he's drunk though.