Kristenthefanatic27

...um...Skyrim? This poem....honestly, I thought it had a little more potential than that, but....cool?

I am so amazed you let your feelings out like that, onto the internet, where everybody can see it. You're brave, a beautiful, brave person. This work of poetry is ...

Let me start off by saying, before you read this, know that I don't mean to hurt or offend you, and I don't want to make you feel bad or ...

Before I begin, I want you to know that in no way am I trying to put you down or judge you. Your writing is beautiful and I would never ...

Oh my God. This was so beautiful, in a beautifully dark way. You really dove straight into that gritty, graphic stuff, and you didn't hold back. I loved that. :) ...

I thought it was really cleverly written. 'you can see the writing on the wall, you are daniel, I am the lion' I thought that was an amazing line as ...

It was beautiful, that's for sure. I loved how much feeling was put into the words behind this poem. Truly, I was moved by this. It was amazing epic and ...

I thought it was interesting. There are some things I have to mention though. Before I say them, please don't take anything I say to offence. If I criticize your ...

I like it! It has so many ways people could interpret this, it's like...I don't know. I'm gonna call it, "open" (I guess?). I like the metaphor you had, even ...

I like it! I think it needs a bit of work (I'll go more into that in a second...) but overall, it's great writing with a nice message. OK. Now, ...

It's really great! I like your writing style, it's really awesome,and not at all boring or two dimensional. I kinda hate to do this, but it's constructive critisism, remember? Ok...I ...

It's pretty! You use a nice vocab and have a really nice, touching style. I could really visualize this as I read it, which says a lot to compliment how ...

I like it! Even though it's short, it has a LOT of meaning behind it, I can tell. My advice would be to lengthen it, maybe (even though I'm not ...