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Re: No. 5
I really liked this. As a Christian, the title of your poem caught my eye. Overall, I liked your message as well. Something reflective and creative while not straying too ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Scavenger, Chapter One: Consequences of a Dumpster
"The world had gone from gold to grey in the matter of a couple of years." - Wonderful hook! Got my attention! =) Overall, I liked this. "End of the ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: The ghost of you - prolouge
I liked this overall, but you have punctuation, grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors that need to be fixed. Overall, this could use a lot of restructuring and some more thought. ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: The Ghost Blogs (Chapter 1, part 1 of 2)
First off, I LOVED this piece! Your narrator, in 1st person, is wonderful! I at first didn't like how you just started off by simply stating and telling the facts ...
Jan 5, 2011