Published February 25, 2011
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so ture.
I really liked this. As a Christian, the title of your poem caught my eye.
Overall, I liked your message as well. Something reflective and creative while not straying too far - well done!
I liked this style too. It was something different, and I thought I wasn't going to end up liking it - but I did.
Sorry, I don't have any criticism or critique to give you. Well done!
When I first saw this I was like 'oh gosh no please do not tell me someone has done a poem in this format again!
But you definitely opened my mind to this style. It's a good, thought provoking poem, with just a trace of angsty after taste. No critiques, sorry I can't be helpful!
hey i really enjoyed this... the funny thing is that this is actually true, because that is what human kind does.
i couldn't find much to complain about XD just watch grammer and stuff... keep writting. if you need a review pm me...
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