Konijn

Thank you for catching those mistakes! I definitely will go back and edit to fix some of these things. As for the meaning, it was actually a simple sort of ...

Thank you!

Thank you for the review!

I haven't the time to review, but this is absolutely stunning! :D

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Hello! Tigerlilly here for a quick review! I happened to really enjoy this poem. The structure of the poem is neat, and the imagery is perfect. In an odd sort ...

Oh wow! Your idea of adding a stanza at the beginning is actually quite inspiring! Thank you so much for that! And many many thanks for your compliments, they mean ...

Actually I said that because it is a legitimate fact that 2/3 abortions are because of convenience. My mother had 3 abortions and 6 children. Knowing that I was incredibly ...

Oh, and the vacuum is basically the machine used where doctors go in and remove the baby from the mothers womb during the first trimester of pregnancy.

Thank you for noticing that!! I'll fix it right away!

Thank you for your honest opinion! I do not think that every woman who aborts or supports it is materialistic, but most abortions are made because the child is simply ...

Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I agree 100% about pretty much everything you mentioned, and I plan on going back and editing my poem to make it ...

Please... Don't ever stop writing! This is absolutely gorgeous and I hope to read more of your works in the future.

Thank you!

Oh my! I had edited to fix all these mistakes on a separate document (as other people have pointed these things out as well), so now I've fixed it to ...