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Thank you!

I loved this! This was a great start and I'm eager to see where this goes. Hopefully, there's a fully realized world waiting to be explored, because that's what I ...

Thank you!

This was interesting. It was a little vague though. Maybe you could add more lines or something, add more detail? Like, who does "He" in the third line? I thought ...

Thanks so much for the helpful suggestion and the wonderful review. :)