KnightTeen

Thanks for the review, and for the whole "than/then" thing. I always get those two mixed up.

While some people might want more description, I never intended that to happen in this prologue. It was meant to be vague while touching on the topics that I wanted ...

Thanks for the review! And thanks for pointing that out. I fixed it.

Good tears, good tears I assure you. I was crying because it was beautiful. And yes, none of us are sane.

Yeah, the formatting is screwy for everyone.

Happy to help!

Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep that in mind when I do the final edit. As for the stanzas, I tried to break them up. The formatting here hates me.

Indeed.

Well, I wasn't planning on a sequel, but we'll see where the muses move me.

Hey, thanks for the review. My writing style tends to be on the choppy side, it's just the way it comes out in the end, and I tend to like ...

Thanks!

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I don't know anyone named Simone I'm afraid, but thanks!