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Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds 4: The Lands of Crayolla
Disjointed riot. The word outrageous comes to mind which may or may not be a good thing... however.. MCGUFFIN! **laughs** Classic that. That is all.
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Disagreeable Persons
No shorter than any other haiku.
Oct 2, 2007 -
Re: corresponding
Simple imagery and metaphor, Someguy. The curl of phrase, that's just words from someone, a letter, and email. The breath in the wire, the telephone. I cannot put a break ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Shards: Prologue: Stix and Stones
Hey Clau, I've already spoken with you about this lump crap but I still wanted to say have my babies. Hi Sam. I don't mean to be avant garde most ...
Jul 7, 2007 -
Re: The Unicorn Killers - Old, decrepit first draft thingy
Good. Read the short story "Conversations with the Unicorns" by Peter Carey. That is all.
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #41 /P
I'm still in my interstate moving type phase and slumming internet cafes, so here is a review in senryu. Better shredding awaits you movement is improved grandeur weighted minutiae gut-rotting, ...
Apr 17, 2007