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I guess a simpler way of putting it would be "show don't tell".

I must disagree with my esteemed colleague alfredsymon. I think "arrive elsewhere" and "constantly be" would detract from the candid, conversational tone, "arrive elsewhere is less direct,it wouldn't

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Technically no, I am referring to a puggle, and thank you for giving me the chance to use the word again. Puggle. Puggle puggle puggle. Megalibgwilia ramsayi, if you haven't ...

I assure you, I only spend time on a poem if I think that it has merit, there's no point critiquing someone who doesn't have the intellect and talent to ...

Any other poetic form or device in the world. Any. Pick one. I would even give you a shiney new pony if you rhymed ABAB rather than AABB, so you'd ...

Zalarus, you're not disagreeing with me, I was saying it shouldn't be more concrete, I was lamenting the current literate climate that poetry has become concrete and formulaic, and praising ...

“If I believed in signs, I wouldn't have answered it. I would have buried my head under pillows and blankets until I couldn't hear it or the voices or the ...

Gee whiz, speedy crits, thanks guys, you're brilliant. Fledgling: I don't know about the same house, they really died in different houses, as she left him and died in the ...

I told you controversy was a good thing. Excessive line breaks work in minimalism, if it was a couple of lines, but a longer poem it interrupts your flow and ...

Did you just withdraw your post? I am amused.

**laughs** I knew I'd like you. I am sorry, I'm provocative and contrary by nature, and I only attack those who can take it, an opinion that melts when challenged ...

Oh but Via, you can't make too much of the violence of the vegies, otherwise you'd lose the point that nobody makes much of the violence of the vegies. Actually ...

Oh yeah, just one ore thing, why did you call it "The Accused" and not "The Condemned"?