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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Love and Longing /P

    Critiquing the Critics Clau; babymaking, my panties, now. MB: "Ditto", not "Dido", Dido's a mythical character immortalized in a a Purcell opera, with her name stolen by a nonabrasive if ...

    May 23, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Words Misunderstood /P

    I love the haze of it, the numb of it, you know. There's a kind of hoarse desperation to Jeremy and Richard, like a small and profoundly impotent dog trying ...

    May 21, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: The Laws of Gravitation /P

    Goodness Gracious Mary Agnes, where are all the replies to this? And so luke-warm comments. Your work is untouched my mediocrity, and yet the awkward blubling of the unformed thought.. ...

    May 18, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Milgram

    I woke to stiff red numbers. And shrieking. I like that. You go for the sensation rather than naming it. Evocative. Your first lines are almost like lyrics, with the ...

    Apr 2, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beneath the Sheets

    May I use my little, fumbled and ill-worded knowledge to dispute the noble opinions preceding mine, even though trying to shred Inc's work is a worthy cause, one I subscribe ...

    Mar 29, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prosthesis Prologue /P

    This generation is a wicked generation; it seeks for a sign, and yet no sign shall be given to it... —Luke 11:29 Very evocative. Brooding, but deliciously so. Okay, I ...

    Mar 25, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Hair

    Delicate, lyrical and very funny indeed. I am amused. Technically, this is not a haiku, it is a senryu. A haiku relates to nature, environment, usually they're pastoral in nature. ...

    Mar 11, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Of Mice and Men, Character Analysis: Lennie

    Ahh, I remember reading this book. If you want, you can link it back to Frankenstein's monster, the architypal misunderstood outcast. What you didn't mension at all was that Lennie ...

    Mar 6, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chionophobia: The Aftermath of Magic /P

    Mm, I disagree with Cadmium, I thought 'genius' worked, and I love your reasoning behind it. I think if you'd put more rigid rhyming it would have seem contrived. It's ...

    Feb 18, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: To Keep No Secrets (Chapter Six added)

    b] Prologue[/b] Reader, can I ask you what a crime is to you? Is it the rape of an innocent little girl who put herself out on the street in ...

    Feb 17, 2007


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