KiraThePotatoChip

Thanks for the review! I'll clear up a few things and answer some questions, so here we go. These are indeed my thoughts, a reflection of myself, yet also the ...

Thanks so much for the review! Now, to clear up most of the questions and a few other things. The big thing people seem to not like in writing is ...

Thank you for the review. I can see where you're coming from with some of the contradictions, and I do need to fix quite a few of them. The main ...

Well, there goes the last bit of my soul. This is gold, that's all I can say. I honestly would love to see you take this list and make a ...

Thank you for the feedback. This story is actually dead, but I want to take elements of it into another story I'm writing. This was about a year ago, just ...