KingKamor

Thanks for the comments! I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can, but it may take awhile. I just got Disgaea 2: Cursed Memories for PS2. That, and ...

Chapter 6: We All Hate Football! Amelia: “Why’s everyone so psyched about tonight’s football game?” Amelia asked her friends as they trudged down the halls of St. Bernard’s with hopes ...

(I apologize for the long wait. I was on a trip with my family the week before last week, and my dad shut off my internet for the week after. ...

Sorry for the wait. I had to get over a writer's block mid-chapter, but I'm over it now! Here it is! Chapter 4: Back in the Rain Craig: “Just when ...

Hey Jon! I really liked this. Cant wait till you put up more. So ah... when will that be exactly??? When I stop being lazy and get the fourth chapter ...

Once again, Myth, thank you for tearing this chapter to shreds. =3

Chapter 3: Traction Craig: It had been so long since Craig had seen the sun. So long, in fact, that he'd forgotten the color of sunlight. There were so few ...

I guess that I went a bit overboard with the punctuation, but I've seen it done in several books, so I thought that it was okay. I'll make a [s]few[/s] ...

Chapter 2: Amelia Regenen "'Who the hell am I?'" the girl echoed at Craig. "I just got this room for my boyfriend and me! How dare you walk in here!" ...

Thanks for the compliments, BrokenSword. I was worried that this wouldn't get off the ground, but I think it will now. I'll post the second chapter in a bit.

@Darklight: I actually editted a whole lot of the infodumping out, and I thought that it was a little better, but I guess not. Thanks for the good critique. Nobody ...