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Re: Thought
This is fantastic. I really enjoyed that you left this poem very free form, like thoughts. I only have two pieces of advice: make sure all the first words of ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Essence
This was incredibly meaningful, well put together, and just fantastic. I realize I am new and my criticism isn't as valid, but I have just two things to say. I ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Violet seasons
Hey, wonderful piece. I know my opinion is not as important as the senior writers, but I'd like to add my thoughts if you're willing to hear them. I'm assuming ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Overcome
That was fantastic. I especially love: "Now you want me? Now I'm gone." It's just incredibly powerful. Are the words "Sunshine" and "Eclipse" supposed to be capitalized though? I'm not ...
Jul 24, 2009
