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Kinera

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Thought

    This is fantastic. I really enjoyed that you left this poem very free form, like thoughts. I only have two pieces of advice: make sure all the first words of ...

    Aug 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Essence

    This was incredibly meaningful, well put together, and just fantastic. I realize I am new and my criticism isn't as valid, but I have just two things to say. I ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Violet seasons

    Hey, wonderful piece. I know my opinion is not as important as the senior writers, but I'd like to add my thoughts if you're willing to hear them. I'm assuming ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Overcome

    That was fantastic. I especially love: "Now you want me? Now I'm gone." It's just incredibly powerful. Are the words "Sunshine" and "Eclipse" supposed to be capitalized though? I'm not ...

    Jul 24, 2009


The ink in which our lives are inscribed is indelible.
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