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Kinera

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Thought

    This is fantastic. I really enjoyed that you left this poem very free form, like thoughts. I only have two pieces of advice: make sure all the first words of ...

    Aug 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Essence

    This was incredibly meaningful, well put together, and just fantastic. I realize I am new and my criticism isn't as valid, but I have just two things to say. I ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Violet seasons

    Hey, wonderful piece. I know my opinion is not as important as the senior writers, but I'd like to add my thoughts if you're willing to hear them. I'm assuming ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Overcome

    That was fantastic. I especially love: "Now you want me? Now I'm gone." It's just incredibly powerful. Are the words "Sunshine" and "Eclipse" supposed to be capitalized though? I'm not ...

    Jul 24, 2009


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights