Kim

ok, so i read the 2nd chapter first, it was enough for me to see if you had the first chapter still up. i really like your story. and will ...

i so enjoyed reading this, the description and feelings are all there. i was drawn to read the entire thing, and was hoping for more. do you have more of ...

all i can say is wow,,,,,,,,,no negative here, i loved it. it actually made sense to me, which could be scary in away. but you are good, no you are ...

pretty much everyone else slammed it, i guess i dont understand. they look for just the grammar. i loved it, i felt the emotion, the insecurities, the love. i think ...

everyone else has brought up the negative, so you dont need that from me. i am not the best on grammar, so when i read, i look at what it ...

hi, your story is very interesting, i liked where it was going. The only problem is the first 3 paragraphs had me completely confused, The hidden children? ect. Starting with ...

me again, i am not going to repeat what has been said by those before me. they definately have more knowledge in the grammar aspect. I can see where you ...

Hi, I liked where you were going with the story, at first i was kind of confused. But as i read on understood alittle more. i personally like discriptions of ...

First off to be honest, i am not a good writer, but i love to read. Yes maybe some of the sentences had to much discription. But i loved it. ...