Killyouwithwords

Thank you for your input! :)

Thank you! I will definitely take your advice!

Thank you so much, I'm glad you took so much from my poem!! I was going to try and make it longer, but I felt like I would just be ...

WOOOWW!!! This isn't a review, so all I want to say is that I thought is was amazingly powerful, I loved it :)

Wow, fantastic job! This really touched me, and I completely agreed with every word :) Amazing job, especially the last lines: “But that's who I am, that's my way of ...

Hi Blackwood thank you for reviewing!! About the line breaks and stanzas, that's originally what I did, but when I published it went to this format. I don't know what ...

Thank you so much for this awesome review!! I agree with you on separating it into stanzas. Originally I had them that way, but every time I publish my poems, ...

Thanks for the review!! I've been trying to fix the problem you mentioned about the uneven lines but I can't figure out how to reword them. Any suggestions?

Oops, sorry...I don't know how that happened. But you know what I mean :)

Thank you so much!! As I said this is just my first draft, so I'll make sure to go over it :)

Thank you for your review!! I did put it in stanzas originally, as I do with all my poems, but every time I break it up it goes back to ...

Very good, but really short. It says a lot in one sentence, however do you mean to add more to it because I would love that! Keep writing!!

Wow, great job describing the helplessness of our society. The truth is, that sometimes people our so desperate to find a cause or a leader that they don't care what, ...

This was beautiful, and touching. I like that it was a poem and a story merged together, you did a good job on that, other than that the flow could ...

Oh my gosh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I agree with you that %u201Csay that they accept diversity" sounds better then what I put. :)