Killer-Ewok

SOME ONE PLEASE REPLY!!

Is anyone going to comment?

'And lastly, try to get your tone down for this story, it's a Fantasy, and it's written as if you're telling the reader a story from 2005.' Im a bit ...

oh and some one probably will say this, so imm gonna say it now. after reading it through i found the error i made "He span around to the smaller ...

Why cant I do the story as if im there, watching it?

ok, ill stop. sorry.

ok then lol, it was when he wrote the old drawf road, you posted some stuff he would never do. but if your sorry then its ok.

ok 3 things: yes griffinkeeper ill use less hyphons next time - thank you adam for helping me along the way - and dynasty what was up with you bad ...

i dont really see how it compares to lord of the rings, i mean the only thing that has been compied are there orcs and dwarves, i took the witch ...

oh i didnt realise, so how do i subtistuse the people speaking, beacuse i cant think of any other way to put it. and thats gonna be annyoing.

i liked it, it pulls you in, and is quite complex, but not that hard to understand (if you know what i mean) So are you going to finish the ...

so what do you think would be the best, most dramatic ending? i was thinking that maybe cytre tries to kill the dwarven king, but when she approaches him, the ...

i was thinking that the dwarf king had just killed the lord, but cytre steps in and duels him = "She jumped down from the grey faltering wall, gripping her ...

Thanks, i did spend longer on this story than the last one, and ive slowed down the pace so i can get the characters across. and about the punctuation, you ...

Just out of interest, why was a boy/man trying to kill a catapillar??? it seems kind of pointless, unless its a giant man-eating catapillar :lol: