Kiicoh

Maybe they're refering to the leather skin being like an old friend, as in they're remembering the same feeling from the last visit, and it's comforting, like a friend? I ...

Interesting... I like the format of this poem. It's cool. As Margaret Louise said, it should be longer. This piece seems like a poem in progress. It definately needs more ...

I think your use of "than" is grammatically incorrect. Should it be "then"? I don't really understand the sentance. Your break points are confusing, and your ideas are broken apart ...

Hm. I had to think about this writing piece for a minute. I like it. It's very interesting. My favorite part was It takes forever for the weapon to get ...

Wow. I love the simplicity! Often when I try rhyming, it comes off cheesey, but this is good. In the section And speaking of grown-ups, There’s one right here, Sitting ...

I liked your idea for this writing piece, but I didn't like your use of the word "people".I think you could have come up with something a little more creative, ...

I thought this was really cool! I enjoyed reading. I could easily visualize the setting and the surroundings. This reminded me of the way people often feel about their first ...