Kepe

Artemis Fowl is just such an enjoyable character. I love how arrogant, broken, and yet naive his little mind is. I wish we would get a little more insight on ...

It was just all a bit boring really. I do believe infants think in simple thoughts, however you could make the first insights into the world a bit more interesting. ...

I hope I wasn't meant to take that seriously, because I didn't. In case it wasn't clear enough already SPELL CHECK If you were really taking this seriously, you need ...

I liked it. There really isn't much more to say after that, only that I especially liked the second story- it sounds like the sort of thing a mad mother ...

Bartimaeus is probably one of the best characters of all time. He is witty, insightful, and yet slightly compassionate. I need to forget the books so that I can enjoy ...

I have to agree with Alainna. The concept of the book was really cool, however I did not like the way Cornelia Funk wrote it. The only character I liked ...

I think Eclipse could be redeemed by Breaking Dawn. As of now I am not the biggest fan of the third book, but I hope the 4Th one sheds more ...

My favorite stanza was the first- however it does need some rhythm work, mainly in the last two lines. The real problem came in the third stanza because of the ...

It really didn't seem very poetic. If you had taken the lines out it would have been a story, or an intro of sorts. Other than a few word pictures, ...

Well, it was rather blah. This may be a bit harsh, but I really found your structure to be rather boring. I mean, I get it: you hate it. I ...

Well, Ten just about said it all, but I have just one little thing to add. You said, " Meg Argentia happened to be her arch enemy at the high ...

Poetry is supposed to be a creative expression of your feelings, thoughts or experiences. Twit is right, this isn't really poetry You have a thought. You 'hate' this person, but ...

So when I first read 'goblin ninja' I was kinda thinking that you had managed to wrap two overused, cliche character types and mix it into one, however as the ...

Normally I am not a fan of poetry written in this style, but I think you pulled it off. Though this has already been pointed out many times, "Then girl ...

It was not too long, rather average actually. In fact, I wanted to read more. I am not particularly adept at grammar, but I did not notice anything. So 'yea' ...