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Teh Wozzinator
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Wow...delete...how...deep

lol...

I know what it means...

but now I'm curious as to what the poem was originally.

Teh Wozzinator

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EnsignRo
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why is it only one word long? and why that word instead of another? i don't see how one word can be a poem and i also don't see the relationship between the title and the word 'delete'.

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Kepe
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Kepe wrote a review · Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:33 pm

Poetry is supposed to be a creative expression of your feelings, thoughts or experiences.

Twit is right, this isn't really poetry

You have a thought. You 'hate' this person, but now you need to make it poetry, not a diary entry.

Good poetry will allow the reader to feel what you feel, and will have some form of creative structure to make it interesting. Also you need to somehow make your word choices flow from thought to thought. Some people tend to think that poetry is just vomiting thoughts unto paper, but poetry is so much more than that. Poetry reflects the soul, gives meaning and understanding to things hidden, and delights the reader. Poetry without rhythm or rhyming structure is especially hard to do right, so with a bit of practice maybe you will be able to express your thoughts more tangibly next time.

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fantasyfreak504 Comment

Poetry is supposed to be your own feelings and thoughts right? right

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Twit
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Twit wrote a review · Wed Jan 30, 2008 1:37 pm

This isn't really a poem. The little I know on the subject of poetry suggests that poems need to be spaced out, full of metaphor, stuffed with double meanings and utterly confusing.

This doesn't fill any of those requirements.

Of course I could be completely wrong, but I doubt it somewhat. And "freak" is not a nice word to call someone.



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