Keowyn

hey, thanks! I'll take the last one out, so, see ya!

Is that two paragraphs??? This is really good, but it was hard to read because I didn't know who was talking about. I'm thinking you need to break this up. ...

oh, don't get me wrong! I love cats, but as an assignment in my Writing Class we had to write a poem about an animal, and I chose cat. And ...

thanx for all that guys- i'll make sure to make sure the stanzas flow better in the future! ^_^

this was good, it flowed, but I think that one or two lines were sort of long. Keep it up though, this is great.

great. . . and after I've read it about a million times I'd have to say those words are annoying.

*Well I added a bit and fixed some spelling mistakes- all in all I think this version is better and more explanatory. Chapter One up soon!* "Stop." The word echoed ...

Thanks for all the suggestions! I will definately continue this, because unlike my other works it actually has a plot and an outline- I tend to get a bit lazy ...