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KelsRich1

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Changing World

    I really enjoyed this story. It was interesting and I really liked the voice of the narrator. It was unique. The only thing that wasn't that great was the ending. ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Some Love the Sea

    This was great! I love how you used the meter and rhyme scheme. :) -Kels :P

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: On the edge of Time

    Wow. I loved it! :) The only thing that I found odd was the form on the word "began" in the last line. Maybe I'm wrong but I don't think ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I miss the Rain

    This poem is really intense. I like it! :) The only thing that bothers me is the first line. It;s written in old english while the rest is more modern. ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Chronicles of Bob

    Well, that was really entertaining. I thought it was very well written and really really funny. Bob sounds really cool :D -Kels ;)

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Illusions

    I really liked this poem! I think it is really relatable because I'm pretty sure a lot of poeple have similar experiances. I like that despite the fact that it ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Ballerina

    I really like this poem. The way you capture the essence of the ballerina is lovely. There are a few gramatical errors that I noticed but I think everyone else ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Promise.

    I really enjoyed your poem because I could really relate to it. I felt you did a good job conveying your feelings and thoughts to the reader. However, the rhyme ...

    Jun 27, 2011


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott