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Re: Changing World
I really enjoyed this story. It was interesting and I really liked the voice of the narrator. It was unique. The only thing that wasn't that great was the ending. ...
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Re: Some Love the Sea
This was great! I love how you used the meter and rhyme scheme. :) -Kels :P
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Re: On the edge of Time
Wow. I loved it! :) The only thing that I found odd was the form on the word "began" in the last line. Maybe I'm wrong but I don't think ...
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Re: I miss the Rain
This poem is really intense. I like it! :) The only thing that bothers me is the first line. It;s written in old english while the rest is more modern. ...
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Re: The Chronicles of Bob
Well, that was really entertaining. I thought it was very well written and really really funny. Bob sounds really cool :D -Kels ;)
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Illusions
I really liked this poem! I think it is really relatable because I'm pretty sure a lot of poeple have similar experiances. I like that despite the fact that it ...
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Re: The Ballerina
I really like this poem. The way you capture the essence of the ballerina is lovely. There are a few gramatical errors that I noticed but I think everyone else ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Promise.
I really enjoyed your poem because I could really relate to it. I felt you did a good job conveying your feelings and thoughts to the reader. However, the rhyme ...
Jun 27, 2011
