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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Rain and Tears

    I like it! Great job! I have a few doubts though. The line "and never for long enough" does that imply that tears should fall for a longer time or ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay

    I know you already have some great reviews below, but I just wanted to comment and say how much I enjoyed this! ;) This was very interesting! I never imagined ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Hello! Kei here to review! I also like how this poem is written in a paragraph as TakeThatYouFiend mentioned. At points it does leave one wondering where a sentence (or ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Maria

    Hello! Kei here. I love historical fiction, love reading it, love writing it :) I really like this poem, the way it's written, and the story behind it. I think ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Dragons Laugh

    Hey great job on this poem! I see that Rainn got the spelling errors so I'll just focus on content :) First of all the stanza length differences threw me ...

    Jun 29, 2012


Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby