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Kazumi

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Gamer Poem

    "Now, here's where I've got a personal issue with your poem. Why the Wii U? Sure, you could say that it's a Nintendo product, and Murioh comes from that company, ...

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Culture Re: Never Gonna Give You Up

    sweet lord

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    what do you mean by that?

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    hot

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    *insert lenny*

    Mar 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Also there's one more thing I'd like you to watch: Your profanity. mmm roasted mmmm *but are we allowed to say swearz? last time I did I got a friendly ...

    Mar 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Even writers who don't watch anime get it when Digi breaks down the narrative, because there's writing behind the visual art. Just like what we do here in YWS. I ...

    Mar 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Focus more on the story though. One common mistake is for writers to get so invested in how to tell the story, to the point where they put less attention ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    perhaps that might be a factor that hurts the story but we'll see huehuehueuhe

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    yay biblical references are you christian?

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    aaaah it's a typo i gotta fix this before some starts making a thesis on why this flashfiction is bad because of that one misplaced comma i once tried to ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    he showered me all over with his thick ranch dressing mmmmm then he ate me and hours later I became a poopoo in the poopoo bowl

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    yes daddy

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    What if I told you this is just one glorified sex joke? I don't really have much to say, except thanks for the reviewwwwww! I kinda didn't expect it to ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    it's just a prank bro

    Mar 17, 2017


Memories, left untranslated, can be disowned; memories untranslatable can become someone else’s story.
— YiYun Li