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Kazumi

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Gamer Poem

    "Now, here's where I've got a personal issue with your poem. Why the Wii U? Sure, you could say that it's a Nintendo product, and Murioh comes from that company, ...

    Tue Apr 04, 2017 3:06 pm
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Culture Re: Never Gonna Give You Up

    sweet lord

    Sun Apr 02, 2017 9:58 am
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    what do you mean by that?

    Wed Mar 29, 2017 1:50 pm
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    hot

    Tue Mar 28, 2017 2:55 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    *insert lenny*

    Sun Mar 19, 2017 4:30 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Also there's one more thing I'd like you to watch: Your profanity. mmm roasted mmmm *but are we allowed to say swearz? last time I did I got a friendly ...

    Sun Mar 19, 2017 3:48 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Even writers who don't watch anime get it when Digi breaks down the narrative, because there's writing behind the visual art. Just like what we do here in YWS. I ...

    Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:14 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Focus more on the story though. One common mistake is for writers to get so invested in how to tell the story, to the point where they put less attention ...

    Sat Mar 18, 2017 5:51 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    perhaps that might be a factor that hurts the story but we'll see huehuehueuhe

    Sat Mar 18, 2017 9:09 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    yay biblical references are you christian?

    Sat Mar 18, 2017 7:40 am
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    aaaah it's a typo i gotta fix this before some starts making a thesis on why this flashfiction is bad because of that one misplaced comma i once tried to ...

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 4:41 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    he showered me all over with his thick ranch dressing mmmmm then he ate me and hours later I became a poopoo in the poopoo bowl

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 4:34 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    yes daddy

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:49 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    What if I told you this is just one glorified sex joke? I don't really have much to say, except thanks for the reviewwwwww! I kinda didn't expect it to ...

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:46 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    it's just a prank bro

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:23 pm


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton