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Re: Gamer Poem
"Now, here's where I've got a personal issue with your poem. Why the Wii U? Sure, you could say that it's a Nintendo product, and Murioh comes from that company, ...
Apr 4, 2017 -
Re: Never Gonna Give You Up
sweet lord
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Strabismus
what do you mean by that?
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: Strabismus
hot
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
*insert lenny*
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
Also there's one more thing I'd like you to watch: Your profanity. mmm roasted mmmm *but are we allowed to say swearz? last time I did I got a friendly ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
Even writers who don't watch anime get it when Digi breaks down the narrative, because there's writing behind the visual art. Just like what we do here in YWS. I ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
Focus more on the story though. One common mistake is for writers to get so invested in how to tell the story, to the point where they put less attention ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
perhaps that might be a factor that hurts the story but we'll see huehuehueuhe
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: No Man's God
yay biblical references are you christian?
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
aaaah it's a typo i gotta fix this before some starts making a thesis on why this flashfiction is bad because of that one misplaced comma i once tried to ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
he showered me all over with his thick ranch dressing mmmmm then he ate me and hours later I became a poopoo in the poopoo bowl
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
yes daddy
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
What if I told you this is just one glorified sex joke? I don't really have much to say, except thanks for the reviewwwwww! I kinda didn't expect it to ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
it's just a prank bro
Mar 17, 2017
