Kazumi

Actually, I'm really happy that you take the reviews around you like a good sport. Keep that up b0ssi. That's what makes a good writer.

I feel a bit bad about this. It didn't really quite reach my standards, and was ridiculously rushed. I'm glad this prompt was taken though. I'll remaster this storyline and ...

Historical fiction? Noice. I'll try doing a historical noir sooner or later. Also, I agree with the women in Greed part. Selling your virginity for a can of corned beef ...

Who or what inspired you to write this flashfic?

Consider this as "How To Not Write Flash Fiction" by awtbeyders. It's ridiculously rushed, one long story haphazardly crammed into 300 words. I'll have to rewrite this one sometime. Also, ...

If not flash fiction, then what is it? It's short enough to be considered flash fiction, actually. I'll review this when I wake up, I'm too sleepy.

Before I start with my review, let me ask an important question. Was this meant to be a flash fiction?

It doesn't take a lot of time to come up with the plot (unless you're thinking a flashfic that narrates a whole saga within 500 words). It just takes a ...

Actually, I never thought of Shiro that way. When I read that, I was like omgwth. The more you know. And yes, flash fiction is poetry, but in prose. But ...

I don't know, maybe you didn't read the storyu the way it was supposed to be. I mean, what kind of regular ravaging girl has the power to break in ...

Btw, I'll just drive you nuts and say I'm not going to italicize those important parts. Read certain flashfics and noir fiction, and you'll see what I mean.

If you dig a little bit more, you'll notice that I'm tryna describe Fate. The fact that her hair rested on Gene's shoulders proves that she of the same height ...

Are you a newbie? Well, don't be shy and ask people around you if you need some help.

I don't know, there are 5-7-5 poems that talk about modern things like buildings and technology and elections but are still considered haiku/modern haiku. I don't know, really. Just my ...

I expected this to be something serious, something deep, something beautiful. You never disappoint.