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Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
Maybe not relate, but at least they get what I'm trying to say.
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
Author's Afterword: I can't put this afterword in the original thing, or else it'll kill the flashfic vibe. So I'll just put it here. Dear God, is it just me ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
Goshdarnit, do I just suck at trying to relay a message or are my flash fiction too vague, or am I just simply terrible as a writer? Ask yourself why ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila
I removed the horror category. Might mislead people again. Just a little tip when you review flash fiction: Read everything. And when I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING. Look for ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: A simple haiku
what is this sorcery
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Historical Haiku!
Also, it should be "Cleopatra sucked." For very good reasons, hue.
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: A Haiku About Butts
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Jun 4, 2016
a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ... -
Re: A Haiku About Butts
a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: A Haiku About Butts
booty booty booty booty shake it all around I agree with what KittyMew has to say. Dat imagery matters just as much as dat ass.
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 3 - Friend of Royalty | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction
oh sh*t a plot twist ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Sin and Death
you know sh*t goes wrong when you sell your soul to Satan sh*t always goes wrong
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: The Way of the World
I can relate to this poem lots. Sometimes in a game of Team Fortress 2 where my team is losing, I just give them some sort of man-speech that usually ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: sensitivity to light
Feels like the first two stanzas are super rushed. What I mean is not too much description of what's happening. It's like you're just giving just the bare bone, not ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: gay best friend
oh my gosh #lgbt is the trend right now i need to make my lgbt flashfic now will look at this and review this later. You're actually touching a very ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: ode to my childhood
Yeah, I think I got way overboard lel. Welp, I'm glad I could help out even just a bit.
Jun 1, 2016
