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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Maybe not relate, but at least they get what I'm trying to say.

    Sat Jun 25, 2016 9:22 am
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Author's Afterword: I can't put this afterword in the original thing, or else it'll kill the flashfic vibe. So I'll just put it here. Dear God, is it just me ...

    Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:55 am
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Goshdarnit, do I just suck at trying to relay a message or are my flash fiction too vague, or am I just simply terrible as a writer? Ask yourself why ...

    Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:41 am
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    I removed the horror category. Might mislead people again. Just a little tip when you review flash fiction: Read everything. And when I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING. Look for ...

    Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:36 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A simple haiku

    what is this sorcery

    Tue Jun 21, 2016 9:19 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Historical Haiku!

    Also, it should be "Cleopatra sucked." For very good reasons, hue.

    Sat Jun 04, 2016 3:59 pm
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

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    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Sat Jun 04, 2016 3:31 am
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Sat Jun 04, 2016 3:29 am
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    booty booty booty booty shake it all around I agree with what KittyMew has to say. Dat imagery matters just as much as dat ass.

    Thu Jun 02, 2016 3:51 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 3 - Friend of Royalty | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction

    oh sh*t a plot twist ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Thu Jun 02, 2016 2:31 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Sin and Death

    you know sh*t goes wrong when you sell your soul to Satan sh*t always goes wrong

    Thu Jun 02, 2016 4:59 am
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Humor Re: The Way of the World

    I can relate to this poem lots. Sometimes in a game of Team Fortress 2 where my team is losing, I just give them some sort of man-speech that usually ...

    Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:37 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: sensitivity to light

    Feels like the first two stanzas are super rushed. What I mean is not too much description of what's happening. It's like you're just giving just the bare bone, not ...

    Wed Jun 01, 2016 1:15 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gay best friend

    oh my gosh #lgbt is the trend right now i need to make my lgbt flashfic now will look at this and review this later. You're actually touching a very ...

    Wed Jun 01, 2016 6:23 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ode to my childhood

    Yeah, I think I got way overboard lel. Welp, I'm glad I could help out even just a bit.

    Wed Jun 01, 2016 4:28 am


"I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
— Lewis Carroll