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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Maybe not relate, but at least they get what I'm trying to say.

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Author's Afterword: I can't put this afterword in the original thing, or else it'll kill the flashfic vibe. So I'll just put it here. Dear God, is it just me ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Goshdarnit, do I just suck at trying to relay a message or are my flash fiction too vague, or am I just simply terrible as a writer? Ask yourself why ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    I removed the horror category. Might mislead people again. Just a little tip when you review flash fiction: Read everything. And when I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING. Look for ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A simple haiku

    what is this sorcery

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Historical Haiku!

    Also, it should be "Cleopatra sucked." For very good reasons, hue.

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

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    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    booty booty booty booty shake it all around I agree with what KittyMew has to say. Dat imagery matters just as much as dat ass.

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 3 - Friend of Royalty | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction

    oh sh*t a plot twist ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Sin and Death

    you know sh*t goes wrong when you sell your soul to Satan sh*t always goes wrong

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Humor Re: The Way of the World

    I can relate to this poem lots. Sometimes in a game of Team Fortress 2 where my team is losing, I just give them some sort of man-speech that usually ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: sensitivity to light

    Feels like the first two stanzas are super rushed. What I mean is not too much description of what's happening. It's like you're just giving just the bare bone, not ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gay best friend

    oh my gosh #lgbt is the trend right now i need to make my lgbt flashfic now will look at this and review this later. You're actually touching a very ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ode to my childhood

    Yeah, I think I got way overboard lel. Welp, I'm glad I could help out even just a bit.

    Jun 1, 2016


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