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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Maybe not relate, but at least they get what I'm trying to say.

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Author's Afterword: I can't put this afterword in the original thing, or else it'll kill the flashfic vibe. So I'll just put it here. Dear God, is it just me ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    Goshdarnit, do I just suck at trying to relay a message or are my flash fiction too vague, or am I just simply terrible as a writer? Ask yourself why ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Origins of the Modern Metro Manila

    I removed the horror category. Might mislead people again. Just a little tip when you review flash fiction: Read everything. And when I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING. Look for ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A simple haiku

    what is this sorcery

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Historical Haiku!

    Also, it should be "Cleopatra sucked." For very good reasons, hue.

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

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    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    a follow-up Although I am a boob person, I'm fine with butts. I like the straightforwardness of this haiku. "I like butts," it says. Period. I did not really expect ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    booty booty booty booty shake it all around I agree with what KittyMew has to say. Dat imagery matters just as much as dat ass.

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 3 - Friend of Royalty | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction

    oh sh*t a plot twist ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Sin and Death

    you know sh*t goes wrong when you sell your soul to Satan sh*t always goes wrong

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Humor Re: The Way of the World

    I can relate to this poem lots. Sometimes in a game of Team Fortress 2 where my team is losing, I just give them some sort of man-speech that usually ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: sensitivity to light

    Feels like the first two stanzas are super rushed. What I mean is not too much description of what's happening. It's like you're just giving just the bare bone, not ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gay best friend

    oh my gosh #lgbt is the trend right now i need to make my lgbt flashfic now will look at this and review this later. You're actually touching a very ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ode to my childhood

    Yeah, I think I got way overboard lel. Welp, I'm glad I could help out even just a bit.

    Jun 1, 2016


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X