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  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    Looking back, I think this little flashfic is very contextual, like you need to know what they're talking about or experience what the main character has experienced to get this ...

    Mon Feb 06, 2017 12:39 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    that's rather nice

    Mon Feb 06, 2017 12:20 pm
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    Actually, I didn't think about interpretation when I wrote this lol. But really, I'm happy that you found this piece to be strong and relatable. Thanks for the review!

    Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:20 pm
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    it's that glitch again aaaaaaah

    Fri Jan 20, 2017 10:23 am
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    it's that glitch again aaaaaaah

    Fri Jan 20, 2017 10:22 am
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    All right, here I am, typing on my phone. Comment might be low on quality. Some fun facts: Fast Food Fiction was the predecessor of Fast Food Fiction Delivery, the ...

    Fri Jan 20, 2017 10:19 am
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    All right, here I am, typing on my phone. Comment might be low on quality. Some fun facts: Fast Food Fiction was the predecessor of Fast Food Fiction Delivery, the ...

    Fri Jan 20, 2017 10:19 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    Thanks for the review! on a side note, happy new year!

    Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:46 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    It's gonna ruin the flashfic vibe. I want to keep the flashfic as pure as possible, so that the readers can have the nicest experience possible. Also, looking into the ...

    Thu Dec 29, 2016 10:16 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    Sup Caulfeld, happy Review Day! To answer that question, yes, "Papa Jesus" is cultural. Also, I never thought of the ending as a lack of ambition/imagination. Pretty insightful. Thanks for ...

    Thu Dec 29, 2016 10:11 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    Sup GJ, thanks for the review! Try putting research into Manila, Philippines, then you'like understand what this is all about :^)

    Thu Dec 29, 2016 10:06 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    Thanks for the review! To answer the question on what happened: This is a very contextual piece. Try googling "Manila." You need to know the situation of the city in ...

    Thu Dec 29, 2016 10:04 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Polaris

    To the people who see this (and to those who don't), have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Apologies for being late to the party. *I can't really ...

    Tue Dec 27, 2016 4:57 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: i want to leave this place

    I screwed up the sentence construction by accident now I look funny

    Thu Sep 22, 2016 1:56 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: i want to leave this place

    just being a bit of grammar nazi It would look funny if the critic who talks about the more advanced stuff like writing style and storytelling when they can't even ...

    Thu Sep 22, 2016 1:55 pm


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