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Re: I Still Have Hope...
@AngerManagment I understand that the repetition can get rather monotonous, but when I write poems, I tend to say them out loud, to hear how they sound. So when I ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: I Still Have Hope...
Thank you so much. Since I only have two peices on here (I'm new) you can visit for more. Thanks again
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: With you =)
A very cute and light-hearted poem. It flows nicely, and I like how the boy's perspective is commenting on the girl's.
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Wind
This is a pretty poem. The line breaking is a little awkard, but that may be intentional. For me however, the awkardness is not needed in a poem about something ...
Aug 3, 2010
