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Re: The Poet
This was... wow. Let me try again: this was captivating. I sincerely enjoyed reading it. The only bothersome thing -an anecdote you couldn't do much about, given the admittedly clever ...
May 27, 2013 -
Re: The Pencil Tray
This was so intense, and it was about pencils! I'm waiting for the dark movie trailer, where it's all threatening until you just see the word "Pencils" flash across the ...
May 27, 2013 -
Re: A Childhood Lover
Why? Why would-? Why? *bangs head against wall* Maybe I'm not deep enough to understand why she returned the ring, but in any case, I loved this! It was so ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Contingence
I feel as if you wrote this while experiencing feelings similar to those expressed here. If you did not, let me know and you'll hear me applauding from my home. ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Family Love.
This is just great. It's equally well-written and hilarious. I'm especially loving that phrase, "deconstructed by a 'constructive' critics' conversational calamity". I feel like you just created the w
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Young Lovers Society
This is so abstract, but I really like it for some reason. Maybe you could expand upon it a little for those of us who aren't completely getting it? Great ...
Nov 21, 2012 -
Re: Death takes it all
Hi! This was a great poem. You have a real talent for...arranging words, if that makes any sense. ;) One thing I would suggest is developing the feelings a little ...
Nov 20, 2012
