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Re: Six silver Chains
NICE I liked it very very much It is very intresting... maybe you should describe more the necklace. bye
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Ocean´s Jewel Part 1
Thanks very much, I will try to fix it. It was very helpful... I am a disaster writing in english, that's why I want to improve... I'm glad you're intrigued ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Camellias
NICE very preety!!! I liked it very much!!! You should add more details, but the rest is very nice bye.. :)
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: The man in front
nice I likike it you should describe more the man in the front, but is very very nice good preety bye..:)
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: It didn't matter
Nice... Very nice.. I liked this very much, i realy did good luck bye
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: What am I?
you do not suck!! It´s very nice But it needs to be longer I liked it very very much!!!! you should go on writing poetry, its nice!!! make it a ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Freedom
I simply loved it!!! It was wonderfull!!! and it's so true!!! it´s awesome!!! You should go on writing things like this it's amazing realy!!!! you rock man!!!!
Feb 26, 2008