Kathrine

Very, very good. I just love how this poem flows. When you say it out loud, it just sounds good. Once again you spark my curiosity. What is the story ...

Very nicely put. I love how you chose to word what you felt. It comes out clear and understandable. Plus, I feel the rhyming just makes it that much better. ...

I am very impressed by this poem. Just the title is capturing. Your word choice was very good. The only change I would make would be possibly integrating some meter ...