Katherine3laine

Hi there! I just want to say I'm really impressed with this piece. You did an excellent job transitioning through the important scenes and drawing your readers in. I only ...

This is fantastic! I can tell you played around a lot with sounds and the final product is gorgeous. I just want to read it aloud to feel the words ...

I thought this piece was really lovely. You have a great start to draw your reader in with "Great men have come and gone in your name, From the likes ...

Hullo Hoot, This is beautifully written. I love that you used one device to create such emotion. My favorite line is, "All ashiver in this gorgeous tremor As our shorelines ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem as it is a great reflection of how many teens feel towards their parentals. I could totally relate to the whole thing! The only ...

I loved the way you took out one word in the first stanza ("But not daring enough, But not daring, but not...") it really captured the idea of hesitation without ...