Katharsis

Incredible. A good writer. The only issues I had with it have been covered by Saint.

Once in a while, the wind would rattle off [s]percusive[/s] percussive rhythms against the shutters of my room, Finally. A good writer.

I'm surprised that someone else has heard of it. I found it through Deus Ex, you could find little snippets throughout the game. The writing and imagery was just insane, ...

The king kind of seemed modest at first but then you made him sound like a cripple or a king afraid of dying for his country. Is that what you ...

Edited the prologue accordingly. I've taken your concerns into account, but I think you'll find that character development is often left for later chapters than the Prologue. Though I have ...

AWritersFantasy: Issues fixed, most of the mistakes you noted that haven't been corrected would only be mistakes if I were to use US english. Made_In_Demise: Last name should be clearer ...

By the way, for the information of some fine reviewers, judder -is- a word. judder [júddər] intransitive verb (3rd person present singular judders, present participle juddering, past and past partic

'Green Eggs and Ham' rather than 'I am Sam.' I knew there was something else about it... Didn't hit me, but hey, good job. Also- Just skimming over again: Ahead ...

I loved it. I wouldn't change it whatsoever, the lack of specification makes it all the more intriguing to interpret. This is something I can genuinely say I liked on ...