Kasie

FirstlyI would like to apologise for the long wait on my PMing I've had quite a hectic Christmas (by the way I hope your's was good). Secondly I would like ...

This is really good, really moving. It confused me slightly at the start because I got the feeling that Kyle was quite old, like a teenager but then you went ...

Wow Clauds! again this is quite disurbing and similar to your poem. Again it's interesting frm this point of view. '...make love to her against her will as much as ...

Wow! Clauds this is really powerfull! I really like it, it's creepy like the others said and you feel a strange connection to the speaker. You feel slightly sorry for ...

This is really good Wes, the plot is interesting and there seems to be a lot happening. However I do feel it's a bit confusing to follow is some places. ...

OK I really like this story! I am a bit confused though I find it really hard to determine what kind of man Lev is and what kind of relationship ...

I like it! The names are good, different and intriguing, I'm not sure about the ending though. It seems as if the story was going to climax there, as if ...