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I like it a lot, continue!

I like this a lot!!

it is vair vair gutt!

Encore! Encore! That's really great! *looks around* What's so bad about eCntral High?

I agreee with Lampshade, and you might also wantto use the work\d "punk" less, it gets kinda old. It's a great story, though!

Loved it. It had a lot of emotion and it was short and sweet easy to read well writtten through and through. not much more that I can say...

This, as I re-read it, seems incredibly sad. It brought tears to my eyes.

I like it a lot, but I think it could be clearer; is Gregory the rapist? Is April the victim? Are they completely unrelatd? And why does April, listening about ...

This didn't really reach out to me, I don't know why. It seemed a little detatched, like there needed to be more description, like in the sentence: "You had so ...

I like this, and I'd like to say it was predictable, but it wasn't. Anyway, great work. I agree totally, and I love your use of larger word, like "pedantic"

that was very good

it is prolly one of my fav romantic pieces I've ever read. Nicely done CL, nicely done. I agree

Dang, Snoink, way to disturb me. uhhh... 'nuff said

I agree with Sam, and I do love this story! It reminds me slightly of Jane Austen's work.

This is GREAT!