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Re: Staring Ahead (Prolouge)
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I like the story so far, but it feels like it needs a little work... Time for nitpicks: Okay, most of the ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Forever Evergreen- chapter 2
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, from what I gathered: Hermione is Pureblood, her family is rich, and her grandparents are Death Eaters? Time for nitpicks: Okay, ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Males - Lesson 4: Avoidance
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This chapter is interesting to me. I like what is happening in this scene. It's not your everyday school drama you face. ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: My sister sings songs
Hello, Reise. Kanome here with a short review c: This poem is actually pretty interesting to me. Dangit, is this based on your life? D: I hope not.. It's hard ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Avant Garde
Hello, Strange. Kanome here with a review. First off... whaa? xD I am laughing my butt off because of this poem. This is the most random thing I've seen all ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: All Is Fair In Love And War
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Well, I liked this scene. Even though the love scenario is cliche, you turned it into where it resembles a Romeo and ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Don't ask me what time it is, I've forgotten
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I really like this poem. It's interesting to me, and probably to your other readers too. I believe you're talented in poetry, ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Let her go.
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I enjoyed this poem very much. It's interesting and simple to read. Time for nitpicks: (Just one though...) I admit, I am ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Therapy Doesn't Work
Hello, Flower. Kanome here with a review for you. Oh wow, that ending. It took me by surprise. I never expected the therapist to be a cold-blooded murderer. That raises ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: The Lake(story made in 3rd grade)
Hello, Katya. Kanome here with a review. First of all, this story is so freaking cute. This is actually pretty good for a story written when you were in third ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Insomnia
Hello, Reise! Kanome here! I read this before, like, a long time ago, but I forgot to review it on that day xD Anywho! I like this poem. I used ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: A Lesson In Life From an A******
Hello. Kanome here with a review. Maaaan, you spoke out openly with this poem. Spoken-word or not, you speak the truth. I was in the same situation, and I have ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 4: Feel It All
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I really like this story line so far. It's mysterious, new, and dramatic. Three in one! Woah.. so is the title called ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Ode to the DMV
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. First off, I love the Shakespearean thing you got going on in this poem c: I guess you are an expert in ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: People that i know from my head~Chapter 1
Hello, Pinkie. Kanome here with a review for you. Overall, I like this story so far. I honestly think this is interesting to me, and probably to your future readers. ...
Jun 28, 2014