KandiNekol01d

Thanks for your review on my poem! As I do with all advice, I'll be sure to use this to improve my writing skills. ^-^

Oh, I hadn't thought about it that way. Thanks for the advice and your review! I'll keep your advice in mind as I write more poems. ^_^

Thanks! I'll try to keep steady descriptions throughout my future literature. If you haven't already taken a look and might be interested, I'd appreciate it if you checked out "A ...

Thanks for your stanza-by-stanza comments! :3 I'll be sure to remind myself to not get carried away with long sentences. It's almost a habit of mine - I just find ...

Thanks! I'll be sure to take your advice about conjuring feelings instead of outright stating them into stride as I continue scribbling drafts in my notebooks. ^-^

Thank you for the review! And my sibling and I do disagree at times. I guess we have our ups and downs now and then. Anyway, thanks again!

Oh, thanks! I really didn't add much emotion (I was thinking of how rough the rhyming was), so I guess it would seem rather bland. But anyway, thanks for the ...

I believe this story has potential, and encourage you to continue working on this! I really liked the constant detail and background information that was woven in. I also liked ...