Kamas

So hi there! This is extremely short for one chapter if you ask me. You probably want to expand a lot more to have a consistent length for a story ...

Time to stretch out my reviewing fingers. Hiya ^^ Definitely a fantastic poem that I enjoy very much, I find it much better than the last one you posted. It ...

Hi Eric. Hmmm, this is interesting. This poem is a stagnant piece with a nice vocabulary sprinkled on top. I'll bluntly I didn't like it. Though it is well done, ...

Hi Greyed! First things first. I love you for having a D.Gray-Man character as your avvie :D As for the poem, I thought it was lovely! I'm not normally a ...

I'm here, finally ^^ I'm going to casually ignore all these wonderful reviews, so please excuse any repetition. Now, this was a really nice piece, obviously in progress. And I ...

Since you reviewed my poem for Haiti, it seems fitting I review yours ^^ To tell the truth, I didn't enjoy this. Your language is fantastic and I enjoy anything ...

Here I am! =D Now this is a great piece. Just really well done. *likes* But I can't make this all positive no? Well, I think you suffer from the ...

XD! Yes! You used the lawn mower! Amazing! My day has officially been made. Just going to do one quick nitpick because laughing shouldn't count as a review. The part ...

Hmm, well this may be late. But I promised a review. Well, I didn't like this as much as hoped I would. I love the idea, but you lost a ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! It's getting rather late so I'm not going to be terribly lucid and I'll keep this brief. Please excuse any spelling/grammar errors. The later it ...

This is the poem you've been waiting to write for a while Ed. I congratulate you for getting to it. It's marvelously done and no ellipsis! =D Zomg yay. As ...

I'm not sure whether this poem was amazing or a precariously balanced of the edge of disaster. One thing that bothered me throughout the poem mostly was the lack of ...

Well, no nonsense review coming up. Though I will say that it's lovely and I've given it a star. I think my biggest problem is the big, flowery language that ...

Hi Flyer, here as requested, with a shredding. Firstly, And now you shout. I look a way . You grab my chin, So I must say... Really what does this ...

Well, I feel that this poem lacked originality and a graceful language to pull it off well. The language was okay, more commonly used for your idea. If you are ...