Kale

This was really sweet, but not so sweet it was that sickly saccharine of trying too hard to be sweet. Now, there are definite issues with this, but I still ...

Hello Bulletproof. I will be reviewing you today, so if blunt and brutal honesty is not your cup of tea, or if you're attached to this poem, I suggest you ...

I'm not quite sure what the title has to do with the poem, or how the reversal of letters ties into it, but the title does read nice backwards, and ...

I have one burning question about this poem, and that question is "Do you, or do you not, have a rhyme scheme?" Actually, make that two burning questions, the second ...

Heya, amu. Here I am to save this work from lonely one-review limbo. And if you know me by now, you know I'm going to be brutally honest, so read ...

I never imagined these thoughts would trouble my most internal organs. That's... quite an opening line. As Auteur already pointed out, it's a bit long. Also, "most internal organs" just ...

Hey there. I'd just like to say first that you have a very interesting take on this poem with how you describe various intangible concepts by taste. Unfortunately, these intangible ...

Were this to be, the Only semblance between you and me, Like jemjive pointed out, this stanza is broken a little awkwardly. I suggest moving the "only" to the end ...

To be absolutely honest, I took one look at this and went "There is no way I am reading this." That was almost a week ago. Now, I have nothing ...

Hi there. Like Snoink already mentioned, this poem is very vague. There's nothing concrete that your readers can directly relate to or that will stick in their minds, so this ...

In the first verse especially, it was really obvious that you picked words to end lines with just because they rhymed. This is because you jumped around so much with ...

The rhyme in this felt obviously forced. I could tell that you used words for just for the sake of rhyming them, jamming in other words in the lines to ...

Kyousuke was pretty thorough with the grammar, so I won't mention anything on it. The one thing I noticed reading this story was that you used a lot of passive ...

Hello there. The first thing I'd like to say is that it would be helpful to include the prompt or, if there was no prompt, what your main goal was ...

The paint-chipped reminisce, This line made no sense. Did you mean "paint chips" instead? The rhyme in this came suddenly with scars/stars. This is because rhyme before it of concrete/meet ...