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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: 02-Things can ALWAYS get worse

    Hello there, ClariceArrais! In the name of the Knights of the Green Room , I, Knight Kyllorac, am here to rescue your work from the ignominy of less-than-two-reviews-ness. I hope ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 10, An Annoyingly Vivid Colour

    Hello there, dark! In the name of the Knights of the Green Room , I, Knight Kyllorac, am here to rescue your work from the ignomity of less-than-two-reviews-ness. I hope ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapters 9-10 (Revised)

    Hello BlueAfrica! It's nice to see you wearing mold again. I also had no idea you wrote novels. I haven't read any of the earlier parts, so if I bring ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction Re: A Time Traveling Teen- (A.T.T.T) Chapter 3: Reunion of Sorts

    Hello again! It seems I'm back for Chapter 3! Something I forgot to mention in my previous review is the little viewpoint headers you have at the start of each ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction Re: A Time Traveling Teen- (A.T.T.T) Chapter 2: Change of Times

    Hello there, GreenTulip! In the name of the Knights of the Green Room , I, Knight Kyllorac, am here to rescue your work from the ignomity of less-than-two-reviews-ness. I hope ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 12:

    Hello there, SereneSimpliciT! In the name of the Knights of the Green Room , I, Knight Kyllorac, am here to rescue your work from the ignomity of less-than-two-reviews-ness. I hope ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch 2) Part 2: Birds of a Feather

    Hello there, Wriskypump! In the name of the Knights of the Green Room , I, Knight Kyllorac, am here to rescue your work from the ignomity of less-than-two-reviews-ness. I hope ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: a thousand leagues (into the sea)

    Merry Christmas! No I did not forget about this. Life just went "HA HA YOU THOUGHT YOU HAD FREE TIME? THINK AGAIN! HOLIDAYS!!! " So here I am to finally ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: CK-P1: Chapter 4: Trust

    Hello there, illitar, and happy Review Day! I haven't read any of the earlier chapters (at least, I don't think I have), so if I bring something up that has ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Magic In Me: A New Life

    Hello, SherraeWilson, and happy Review Day. The one thing about this prologue (I am assuming it is a prologue) is that it jumps all over the place. It starts out ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Death Wish : Chapter Two

    Hello, Skittles, and a fine Review Day to you! Before I start this review, you should know that I haven't read Chapter One, so if I bring up an issue ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: TOMORROW: Trials of the Lost Swallows Chapter Five

    Hello Annapurna, and happy Review Day. I haven't read any of the previous parts, so if I mention something that was already covered in one of the earlier chapters, feel ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Risk ch 2

    Hello there, CandidDreamer. I hope you're having a fine Review Day. I haven't read the previous part(s?), so if I bring up something that was already addressed in-story, feel free ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Twenty point 2 of The Lost Legend - The Seventh Blade.

    And I'm back again for Part Two. I'll just say first that "chestnut astride black" reads like chestnut-colored creatures riding black mounts instead of the cavalry riding horses colored chestnut ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Twenty point 1 of The Lost Legend - The Seventh Blade

    Hail fellow Tsunami Tyrant! May our victory this Review Day be as sweeping as our oceanic namesake. Now, I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so if anything I ...

    May 26, 2013


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom