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Hello there, BiscuitsBatchAvoy. I'm here to rescue this chapter of yours from the Green Room on this fine Review Day. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so if ...

Hello again! My first impression of this chapter was that it was really short. The previous chapter was quite short as well, but this one was much shorter, and the ...

Hello, megsug! I'm here to rescue this from the Green Room on this fine Review Day, though I haven't read any of the previous chapters. The idea is that Nidi ...

Why hello there, Rubric. I don't think I've ever had the pleasure of reading or reviewing one of your works (or if I did, I don't remember). So let's fix ...

I see you used my title suggestion~ I stuff art in my underwear First reaction: That is a very strange place to stuff artwork... And then I saw the "drawer" ...

Okay, so my sister, in a rare desire to review something, came across this story and found herself at a complete loss as to how to review it. Which is ...

There are two main issues with this article from a technical standpoint: the lack of a clear focus and the usage of your sources. @Meandbooks already covered a little bit ...

A quick note about formatting your poetry with the editor: Shift+Enter = no space after the paragraph/line Just Enter = automatic space after the paragraph/line No BBCode needed! Generally for ...

Happy Review Day! The title of this is what caught my eye as I was scrolling through the Green Room, so good job on that. ;P “What?” I demanded of ...

Happy Review Day, OneThousandDrums! It's been a while since I last reviewed, so I hope you'll pardon me being a bit rusty. If you have any questions about anything I ...

Congratulations! You are the lucky recipient of my 1075th review! With that said, I shall begin by pointing out some grammatical stumbles no one else caught. Five years after the ...

A few typos (much fewer than the previous chapter) aside, this chapter was quite tight. I don't have much to say plot-wise, except Oooooh! The plot thickens! COBALT chuckles, able ...

Before I review Chapter 15, I'll be reviewing this one, and then after Chapter 15, maybe I'll finally finish reviewing Chapter 5. >.> "You're pushing it, smart ass," Eriks growled. ...

First off, I'd like to say that you have a very interesting story here. You might want to change one of the categories to Narrative, since narrative poems tell stories, ...

Without warning, I find myself in darkness, similar to what happened before when Maggie was being inspected. Though, this time, I'm out for what I guess is about five minutes, ...