KailaMarie

This is beautiful! I love it! The way it sounds, the imagery, the enjambment, and all the awesome stuff you did. brush awaystrangled curls and dry humorI turned the paper ...

I really liked this. It was interesting and really relatable and a different perspective, I think. I liked how it's in 2nd person, because it just made the connection easier. ...

Hello! Ok, here we go! “If I leave now then the newspaper won’t be out on time. I am not going to let that happen, again.” I don't think you ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Oonchee was going to be angry. He wasn’t one to complain—he let Nigel push him onto First Avenue without protest. These two sentences don't flow together ...

Hi! I', Kaila, and I will be reviewing for you today! :) We held hands through the good and bad. Pain joined us a little later. He, on the other ...

This is really well written. There were a few grammar and speling things here and there, but only a couple. I really like your style. It's honest, but beautiful wording. ...

Very interesting. You have a really awesome tone and style. Some of the lines were so beautiful, like She had a gentle, summery sort of voice. She was sweet and ...

Hi, I'm Kaila. :) So, I'll start with what I like. I like how the emotion is really easily felt in this. I can feel the anxiety, and the nervousness ...

Hello! I'm Kaila. and I will be your reviewer today. Okay, so overall, I thought it was a cute story. I liked Chris, he seems pretty well thought out and ...

Hello, I'm Kaila. I don't really have much experience on poetry, but I think this is very beautiful. I really like your wording, and the tone it sets. I agree ...

Helooo! It's me again! :) (By the way, this review is really long, but don't worry, there are good comments in here too. It's mostly because I have to do ...

Hello! I'm KailaMarie, and have been slacking on reviewing a whole lot lately since I haven't had much time, but waa laa! I'm here to review your's! Yay! Oh, god, ...

Sorry it took me so long to answer. I haven't had time to go online in a long time! (Even now I should be doing homework! Haha.) Anyway, on to ...

Hey! I'm Kaila, and I will be your reviewer for today. Overall, I liked it, but I have a few things to suggest. First of all, you mention Mary twice, ...

Hey! It's me! ...Kaila... right. Anyway, onto the review. My first thought is make it shorter, and you'd get way more people reviewing it, I think. It just seems like ...