Kaila

Hi! Thank you for commenting on my chapter :) Just fyi the reason you are probably confused about details is because it sounds you haven't read my previous chapters. That's ...

Thank you so much! I will make those edits.

Thank you so much!!! I was feeling kind of unsure about this chapter, so I really appreciate your support :) And yes, I agree that the last sentence doesn't flow ...

Thanks Steggy!!

thank you lizzy!

Thank you so much!! I will add that "nervously"

Hi Snazz Pizzazz! Thank you for the review! In response to your question about the science test thing: Jame is on the lower side of 16 and Kassi on the ...

Thank you, LadyRanicorn!!

Thank you so so so much for this! I can totally understand where you're coming from with your suggestions and I will do my best to incorporate them into my ...

thank you so much for your comment!!! I can definitely see where you're coming from with your suggestions and I will use them:)

hmm. I don't exactly mean they don't try to try, I just mean that they would never even imagine that the should try; they have no idea that they're hurting ...

Thank you!! The poem actually isn't as general; it is about one person, so "you" references that person. But that is an interesting idea!

Thanks for your review!!

oh wait oops I didn't mean you exaggerate your actions I mean you DON'T exaggerate your actions. Sorry about that!

Hi again! Thank you for this review; I really appreciate the feedback. I will try and go in and make some edits, especially with the talking heads thing. I reread ...