KaiTheGreater

...I cried. Just... wow.

I'm not going to give this a like because I don't support the theme or the message, but I thought it was well written. Also, you managed to describe the ...

Dat's good. :)

This looks like a combination of two poems I wrote recently and was considering posting. Now I'm suspicious. Are you a mind reader?

I think this was great. I don't have a whole lot of time to comment, but I just wanted to let you know that according to the government, if you ...

That last line made me think... At first I thought you meant she died inside, that she no longer cared for anyone or anything an d she had no hope ...

Shame on you, Nate! You spelled 'your' wrong! You're being a bad influence on the children!! *gives disapproving glare*

But it was The Hobbit! You could have labled it romance and I'd have known to stay away... *glares*

*sneaks in 24.19 more milliseconds of isolated grief*

*and two seconds, because it's just...*

*and six minutes*

*and three days, and seventeen hours*

*for seven months*

*in a dark, dusty corner*

...If you say so... *cries*