KaiTheGreater

That's a great idea, only I can't draw. Like, at all. :)

Thank you for reviewing! :) This "something" (as we're not quite sure if it's a poem) came to life in the chatroom, actually. I had writer's block, and they told ...

I dunno about being awesome, but thanks anyway!

I'm with you all the way on this subject. In fact I'm working on a poem about how twisted society is today, and it deals with the same subject. I ...

I find it slightly amusing that after editing, I am offered the chance to "Go view reality." :p

Haha, that's okay- happens to me all the time. ;)

Not sure if it's just my computer acting up again, but I don't see any poem... :(

Thanks for reviewing! :) I will definitely check out your work!

YOU JUST BROKE MAH HEART like seriously this is so incredible.

I think this poem is part of the novel Adri wrote, called Silence is Silver.

This... took my breath away. I really can't critique it, it's already perfect. Awesome job, I really love it!

Okay, I just realized my last "review" wasn't really all that helpful. So, here we go. Round two. First off, I don't know if this was intentional or not, but ...

Also, welcome to YWS! Glad to have such a talented writer here!

I really can't say anything other than it's beautiful, I loved it, and thank you so much for posting this.

So I read this poem and my first impression was as follows: A mother bird abandoned her babies to die. Kind of a depressing theme, but a pretty cool poem. ...